Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Ode to Cherries

Oh, For a Cherry: An Ode

Cherubic fruit for the world to relish
Yet it comes and goes so fast.
A lightning flash of a season
Of plump, purple red
Delicious, dripping cherries
Must satisfy
Until the summer returns.
Each one
Delicately placed
In a waiting mouth,
Opened like a baby bird’s,
Is savored to the full extant
Before the pit is neatly spit out,
A game in and of itself.
Oh, for the sweetness of a cherry
The tender, perfect fruit
Waiting to be eaten
For why else would there be a confection of such perfection?
A shining aurora of the fruits
Which must wait
For the bright summer months
And then again
For a whole year
Until the summer returns.

4 comments:

rachel said...

Shava,

What a marvelous poem! I don't even like cherries but I feel that I am missing something great in the "cherubic" "tender, perfect fruit."

My favorite line is "for why else would there be a confection of such perfection?" with the rhyming and the use of rhetorical question.

Maybe describe summer differently by the end or is the repetition meaningful?

Happy writing!
Rachel

Ariana Kattany said...

I love the imagery and how the words flowed! Good job and keep it up!

Jessica said...

This is amazing shava! I don't even like cherries but your poem made me want some anyway!

ally fer said...

i love cherries so this was fun to read!
you were very descriptive and detailed.